A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away...

It is a period of civil war. We know the main characters, the heroes, the villains.
But a war never involves just a handful of important people. There are always countless others on each side providing support for their leaders: technicians, mechanics, ground troops, intelligence officers, pilots, logisticians, procurement officials, medics, mess hall workers, instructors. Though often kept in the background in the Star Wars universe, without them there would be no Empire or Rebellion. This page is dedicated to one such group of no-names doing their own small part to restore freedom to the galaxy...

Corona Squadron is an X-wing squadron I created as part of my Star Wars RPG character's background. At first that was all it was--just a quick phrase scribbled on a character sheet; however, through a strange set of circumstances that phrase started becoming more, and more, and more. These pesky pilots now take up a lot of my time, demanding to be given attention in stories and such. I don't complain, though, or when I do I don't mean it: I've found that writing fanfics about them is a wonderful release for me, even if I never finish half of my stories due to this evil thing called "writer's block." (This Garfield comic helps to illustrate my attitude toward these characters.)

Even though I've created a whole squadron of fighter pilots with almost three years' worth of history behind it, I still focus primarily on my RPG character in the stories and his wingman to a slightly lesser extent. In most of my online Star Wars interactions, I generally have user id's relating to either my character's nickname of Thumper (see Cracian Thumper, not Bambi-Thumper) or his squadron designation, Corona Nine.

These stories are posted for the enjoyment (hopefully) of those who stumble across them and take the time to read them. The Star Wars universe belongs to Lucasfilm, and I'm not making any profit off of this (quite the opposite, really). I'll leave the big characters alone and just play in the corner of this amazing galaxy by myself, okay?


Corona Squadron

co ro na. n., pl. -nas or -nae. 1. The highest-temperature region of the Sun's outer atmosphere.
2. The only part of the Sun visible during a total eclipse. see HALO.

The Coronas are an X-wing fighter squadron active in the time roughly between the Battle of Yavin and the Battle of Hoth. There are no canon movie characters in the squadron, no relatives of canon characters, nothing like that--it's just a group of ordinary pilots working together to help the Rebellion. They have their own quirks, their own qualities and their own adventures, which I've been trying to chronicle for several years now. Some of those adventures are listed below.


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Stories

Most of these stories build on previous ones. While my hope is that they could be read independently of each other, there are a few where something significant could be lost if the reader doesn't have the assumed background knowledge from another story. For that reason, I'm including a "Recommended Reading" field for those stories.

Constructive feedback on stories is most welcome. If you e-mail me, please put an appropriate subject line on the e-mail so I won't accidentally delete it as spam.
 
 
The Storm After the Calm
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Revision E  (12-17-04) 40 pages
While not a Corona Squadron story per se, it can be considered a prequel. "Storm" explains why Darin (my primary character) joined the Rebellion.
 
 
Commencement
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Revision G  (8-3-08) 38 pages
Chronologically, this is the first Corona story so far. Think of it as a television show's pilot episode (no pun intended): it introduces all the pilots as it follows Darin in his first days with the Coronas and on his very first combat mission. It takes place about two months after the Battle of Yavin when the Rebels are facing a fighter pilot shortage.
I consider this to be a fairly stand-alone fic, and therefore it has been circulated to a few other places. An earlier revision can be found in the fanfic section of EchoStation's Downtime. (There's an even earlier version than that on another website, but it's one of my earliest writings and is kinda embarrassing for me to look at now.)
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Fleet Description
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Revision B (7-1-07) 5 pages
This is not a complete story. It's a small scene taken out of its overall context whose sole purpose is to describe the various ships in Crescent Star's fleet. It was meant to be incorporated into the story "Outside Looking In", but I decided it would be best if I only summarized this scene in there and left this extended version as a separate document. This information is needed for a couple other later stories that I'm also working on, and I wanted to make it easily available for people. It takes place two days after "Commencement", or four days after Darin joined the Coronas.


Outside Looking In
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Revision A (7-21-08) 38 pages
OLI starts two days after "Commencement" ends. It finishes most of the introductory information started in "Commencement" (in other words, it's meant to be the last big info dump). Darin has to learn how to adjust to his new lifestyle with the Coronas onboard Crescent Star while the events from his first combat mission are still fresh in his mind.
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How to Handle Yourself
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Revision C (5-29-04) 9 pages
This is meant to be a lighter piece. A couple of weeks after he joins the squadron, Darin at last gets his callsign.
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Metal Coils
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Revision A (4-11-05) 44 pages
Recommended Reading: How to Handle Yourself
This takes place a week after "Handle." A series of computer glitches, worsened by the aftermath of a rookie mistake, lead Darin into a situation he didn't expect.
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Convergence
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Revision A (5-10-03) 6 pages
Recommended Reading: How to Handle Yourself
Another light piece (in spite of the serious-sounding title) that takes place when Darin is still pretty new to the squadron. Quiver and CC decide to have a little fun with him while they're on R&R.
 
 
Searching and Finding
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Revision A (8-5-03) 38 pages
Admittedly an experiment in writing on my part, but one I had fun with nonetheless. This takes place about eight months after "Commencement". On a Rebel world, the Coronas help look for an Imperial pilot who was shot down. This story is told in nothing but first-person point-of-view, which may either make it horribly confusing to readers or somewhat more interesting. If you read it, let me know which it is.
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No Going Back
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Revision A (8-12-04) 64 pages
Recommended Reading: The Storm After the Calm, Searching and Finding
This story takes place a month after "Searching and Finding". I had a hard time thinking of a summary that didn't give everything away, and I finally decided on saying this: this story could have easily been titled "Blood and Water" due to the dominant theme (character relationships with family members and friends or squadmates), but I kept it as "No Going Back" for various reasons. In addition, it's a very character-driven story.
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Solid Ground
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Prologue-Chapter 2
Ch. 3-Ch. 5
Ch. 6-Ch. 8
Ch. 9-Ch. 11
Ch. 12-Ch. 14
Ch. 15-Epilogue
Revision B (2-22-06) 100 pages
This takes place about a year after "Commencement". The Imperials set a trap for the Rebels on an isolated colony world, which strands the Coronas on the planet while the Imperials hunt for them. I posted Revision A (9/04, 71 pages) on the JC Forums as a stand-alone story, where it was also reviewed in the Fan Fiction Newsletter in March 2004. Revision B is my attempt at fixing the worst of the plot holes in Revision A without creating too many new ones. Ground is potentially the beginning of a plot arc during that particular stretch of time and is my favorite story. If a person was to only read one story of mine ever, this is the one I would ask him or her to read.
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Muddy Waters
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Prologue-Chapter 2
Ch. 3-Ch. 5
Ch. 6-Ch. 8
Ch. 9-Epilogue
Revision A (3-26-07) 67 pages
Recommended Reading: Solid Ground
Waters is the sequel to "Solid Ground", and its Prologue begins on the night of the Epilogue in Ground (Rev. B). The Coronas must deal with the aftermath and consequences of the events on Lokinha, both at a personal level and at higher, more official levels.
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Additional Stories
 

The Way
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Revision A (6-17-08) 73 pages
This is not a Corona story or even a Rebel story, but it will tie in with them on a tangent down the road. It's a story about an Imperial TIE Pilot stationed on Craci IV after the Imperial occupation and the life-changing event he experiences. This is part of the "OC Project" in the Essential Guide to OCs thread on the TF.N boards. Special Features (including the aim of the OC Project, the creation of this story, outtakes and more) can be found on the last page of the offsite HTML link. While it didn't win, this story was nominated for Best Drama and Best Male Original Character (Chase Barton) in the Summer 2008 Saga Era Fanfic Awards on the TF.N boards.


All I Want
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Revision A (4-8-04) 3 pages
This was my entry in response to the JC Fan Fiction Boards Valentine's Day Love Letter Challenge. No one from Corona Squadron is in it, but one of the Quakes is. The challenge was as follows: "Write a love letter written to someone or a story about a love letter. The word limit is 2000 words and your story must be one-post." This particular entry takes place sometime before "Solid Ground".

 
In All Probability
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Revision A (3-6-07) 3 pages
This was another challenge entry on the JC Fan Fiction Boards. This particular one is for the Essential OC (Original Character) thread, and the challenge reads, "Between a Rock and a Hard Place. Create a scenario that puts one or more of your OCs into a situation in which a choice must be made between two options. The options are mutually exclusive, and either choice would produce an undesirable outcome for the OC(s)." This entry also takes place sometime before "Solid Ground", probably before "Metal Coils" too, and Botch gets some of the limelight this time. It may eventually be reworked and put into a full-length story, but that's a ways off.


Behind the Line
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Revision A (2-10-07) 5 pages
Yet another challenge entry (though it was written before "In All Probability") on the JC Fan Fiction Boards for the Essential OC (Original Character) thread. The challenge: "'Everyone has a price.' Does the old saying hold true for your OC? Offer them a bribe to do something that they would otherwise find reprehensible, and let us all find out! And remember, often a person's 'price' has nothing to do with money..." The summary for my entry is simply that not every Rebel is a good guy. Pellicer is the main character. I wrote and posted this story within 24 hours because I was quickly approaching the challenge deadline, which is much too fast for me, and as such there are lots of rough spots and hiccups in this story that I'd love to fix now that I've had some time to distance myself and look back at it. This is another vignette that may someday get a nice revamping and get put into a full-length story. At the very least I want to give it a good edit hack job one of these days. It takes place before "Solid Ground".

 
Root and Weed
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Revision A (8-5-07) 5 pages
And another challenge entry on the JC Fan Fiction Boards Essential OC (Original Character) thread. The challenge reads, "More Than Meets The Eye... Your OC is about to make a shocking discovery. The object/person/droid they have seen everyday for years is going to turn out to be something very different from first impressions. Is their fiance actually an underworld hitman? Is their hairy, burly partner in crime really a ballet dancer? Is their airspeeder really a 40-foot robot? Whatever the case may be, will your OC like this sudden change...or will they hate it?" My oh-so-detailed summary for my entry is, "A scientist learns a secret about something he cares about." No Coronas were harmed in the writing of this story, but I did have fun playing around on Treminal III, Mackin's homeworld. The Word document is the same as the HTML link except for a few minor corrections to make the story clearer. And hey, it won the challenge that month, which was surprising but cool. The main character, Milin Ba'hon, was nominated for Best Non-Human in the 2008 Saga Era Fanfic Awards on the TF.N boards.


Night Vision
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Revision A (10-15-07) 4 pages
Yup, you guessed it, another challenge entry on the JC Fan Fiction Boards Essential OC thread. The challenge: "When you’re a child anything can make you happy: ice cream, a trip to the grocery store, running with scissors. For adults it’s a bit more complicated. With stress and worries beating down on you, it takes something really exciting to cause that happy, giddy, lighter-than-air, run around and break stuff happiness. So lock up the good china, and give your adult OC something to smile about." Yeah, I actually had to be nice to my characters. The summary for my entry is, "A Rebel pilot tries to cope with job burnout," and said Rebel pilot is Darin.


In-Dependence
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Revision A (12-21-07) 6 pages
Hello, what's this? Another challenge entry on the JC Fan Fiction Boards Essential OC thread, you say? The challenge reads, "Hero Worship! Everyone looks up to someone, and your OC gets the chance to take a closer look at his/her hero. Does the hero measure up? Does your OC notice if s/he doesn't? Does your OC turn into a creepy stalker? Inquiring minds want to know." I didn't stick very closely to the challenge's intent, but the basics are still there. My summary for this story featuring the Mackins is, "A military family deals with a member's secret deployment in different ways. Introspective piece."


Turnaround
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Revision A (6-30-08) 6 pages
Yes, another Essential OC challenge entry. The challenge was, "You can't bring me down! Let your character be happy and satisfied for a change. Then, make the worst happen, but, as the challenge states, for whichever reasons it does not bring him down. He's still happy after all is said and done. We can't bring them down, but it won't be for lack of trying." This takes place about two months after Darin joins the Coronas, and while this doesn't compare to the bad stuff I put him through before he joined the Rebellion, Darin is still the victim in this story.


Reincarnations
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Revision A (5-10-03) 22 pages
Recommended Reading: The Storm After the Calm
I'm temporarily removing this story from the site. It needs a complete overhaul to get rid of the vast amounts of plot holes, and I honestly don't know how I'm going to do that yet. It'll be back up once it's properly reworked.


The Good Stuff
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Revision A (1-7-07) 2 pages
This isn't exactly a fanfic: it's a song rewrite. Usually my song rewrites come out much too forced, like I'm trying to fit the proverbial square peg in the round hole, but this one I thought came out fairly well (otherwise I wouldn't be posting it here). It's now about a Rebel starfighter pilot immediately (i.e. hours at most) after the Battle of Endor. The assumption I'm going on is that the happy celebration at the end of RotJ did not happen minutes after the Second Death Star blew up: there was still a very long, very ugly battle ongoing in space that had to be resolved, and even after the battle the Rebel forces needed to stay alert for any more Imperial ships coming in. Based on that, in my mind the Battle of Endor would have been the worst event of all the Star Wars events shown in the movies in which to be a starfighter pilot, and that's what this rewrite is about.


Pilots

Information on each of the Corona Squadron pilots can be found on these pages. Includes portraits (if available), biographical information, and a bit more. (Note: the theme songs are not Star Wars galaxy (in-character) theme songs. They're contemporary songs that I myself associate with each pilot.)

Quentell Mackin
Ikoa Fyndcap
Chopper Forsgren
Kalre Unatel
Maptoo Moog
Shaun Pellicer
Chryse Cerac
Slurry
Steen Weas
Darin Stanic
Quiver Yanilr



Craci IV

Craci Four is Darin's homeworld and makes its largest appearance in "The Storm After the Calm" (and another large appearance in "The Way"). The Rebel Alliance Sourcebook for West End Games has a listing for Cracian Thumpers, and for me that was the origin of the Craci System. I made up a brief history and culture for the world of Craci Four, and if I ever get it written up in a legible format then I'll post it here. But until then, "Storm", "The Way" and the following planetary stats will have to do. Yes, the planetary scientist in me actually sat down one day and calculated these planetary properties. Blame my professors. (Note: these are not "canon" stats)
 
Planetary Stats
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Revision A (1-15-02)
 

Donri
Donri is one of the most popular sports on Craci IV. A small information page can be found here. I have big plans for that little page and intend to give as comprehensive an account of the game and its rules as I can, but all that is in the ever-elusive future. Right now the only thing on the page is a picture of a 4" model I customized into Darin in his donri gear.

More history and info on other major planets I work with should be coming eventually. For two small stories set on Treminal III (an original planet serving as Mackin's homeworld), jump up to "Root and Weed" and "In-Dependence" in the "Additional Stories" section.


Pictures

I'm a visual person, and because of that, pictures help me get things straight in my head before I try to write them out. Sometimes I even convince myself that I can draw, which just leads to chaos. Anyway, here are some pictures associated with the Coronas. My goal is to one day have individual portrait sketches of every squadron member, and maybe when I get done with all of them I'll be good enough where I can go back and redo these early ones to make them better. (Note: Individual portrait sketches are now on that pilot's bio page, found above.)


Sketch of whole squadron

The Squadron, Anime style

Pictures from my trip to Corona, California, and other Corona-related places and items  (updated April 2008)

Link to pictures of a 4" tall Christmas ornament I customized into Darin playing donri

Darin, ink and watercolor

A bigger version of the picture at left. The Trio together, pencil
(left to right: CC, Quiver, Darin)



Darin's helmet design. And mine.



Current and Future "Front Burner" Projects

* Next sequential story after "Outside Looking In"  2% complete. Most of outline done 7/9/08.

* Challenge entry, "Turnaround"  Complete and linked 7/21/08.

* New and improved revision of "Commencement", streamlined and smoother and totally different in some areas   Complete and uploaded as a Word doc 8/3/08.

* "The Way", a new full-length story about an Imperial TIE Pilot. Complete and uploaded 7/21/08.

* "Outside Looking In", sequel to "Commencement"  Complete and uploaded 7/1/07. Fixed some parts 7/21/08.

* Story set six months after "Commencement"  45% complete, on hold


Latest Updates to this Site

8/24/08. I completed and posted two more sketches. One is CC's portrait, found on her bio page (which also has some updated text). The other is a sketch of the Trio together. A small version and a link to a bigger version can be found above. I'm still experimenting with the best way to scan or otherwise electronically capture the sketches, so some tweaks may be coming on that front in the future.

8/5/08. I finished a portrait sketch of Quiver I'm really happy with. That can be found on his bio page, and I smoothed out the text there too. The new final version of "Commencement" is also uploaded as a Word file. I added a new archive page showing earlier site updates below. I split up the "Solid Ground" and "Muddy Waters" HTML files into smaller groups of chapters. I'm planning on doing the same for "No Going Back" as well.

7/21/08. Finally got caught up on some of my huge to-do list around here! All full-length stories should now have both a Word document and an HTML document either uploaded or linked. The shorter challenge entries will not have a separate Word document in most cases and will continue to be linked offsite. I have to figure out how to better organize the listing of challenge entries on this page, since some don't have a specific spot in the timeline, and therefore it'll be hard to put them in chronological order. While I do consider them "Corona canon", I don't really want to put them in the big main story listing for some reason, so they'll stay in the "Additional Stories" section for now.
My latest challenge entry "Turnaround" now has the info and link available to it. The latest tweaked version of "Outside Looking In" is uploaded. I also uploaded the remaining pilot biographies. The complete Word document for "The Way" is now available. Some insignificant formatting tweaks were done to a couple of files. The multimedia section is still in-work, since that's a big project for me with lots of links going everywhere that I have to coordinate. I also scrubbed the Links page (link found below) and included some personal favorite fanfic sites there too.

7/9/08. Yes, after seven years, I finally have full bios actually written down of all the Coronas. I'm working on posting them here and expanding the ones that had been posted previously. Darin's bio page now has a sketch of him that I am very, very proud of. After many years and numerous attempts, I finally was able to capture on paper what I think he looks like. I also updated a few statuses and removed "Reincarnations". I hope to get some major work done on this page over the next week or so, including uploading all missing files and adding the info for "Turnaround".

4/20/08.
Added two new pictures to the Corona-related places and items page. Added latest sketch of Darin. Contemplated taking the assortment of drawing-type stuff and putting it on its own page.

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